Question

【題目】書面表達

五一期間你參加了我們學校舉辦的連云港三日游，根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇100詞左右的短文。

第一天：新浦公園：劃船，聽京劇，看時裝表演，乘坐激動人心的過山車

動物園： 看動物，如猴子，獅子等

第二天：花果山：欣賞美麗的自然景色，看到許多西游記（Journey to the West ）里的人物：唐僧，孫悟空，豬八戒。到達江蘇省最高峰----玉女峰（the Yunu peak ）。讓人有一種騰云駕霧（ride a cloud ）的感覺。

第三天：海濱浴場（seaside swimming pool）：玩沙子，放風箏，打沙灘排球,吃美味的海鮮。

My Best Holiday

Answer 1

【答案】My Best Holiday

On May Day, our school held a 3-day trip to Lianyungang. On the first day, we got to the Xinpu Park. We went boating on the lake and listened to Beijing Opera. We watched the fashion show and took the exciting roller-coaster . then we went to the animal zoo.There we saw many animals, such as monkeys,lions and so on. We enjoyed ourselves .

On the second day. We went to the Huaguo Mountain. On it we enjoyed the beautiful natural views, we saw many characters in the play ---Iourney to the West, such as Tang sen, Sun Wukong, Zhu Bajie.then we arrived at the first highest mountain in Jiangsu province—the Yunu peak. Standing on the the Yunu peak made us feel like riding a cloud. All of us felt the nature is great. On the third day. We got to the seaside swimming pool. On the beach, we played with sand and flew kites. We played with sand –volleyball happily. In the evening, we tasted the delicious seafood. It’s a wonderful trip. We will never forget it!

【解析】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示，介紹自己參加學校組織的去連云港的三日游。題目中已給出了具體的寫作內(nèi)容，非常詳細，我們應用正確的語言將這些內(nèi)容表達出來。在寫作的內(nèi)容上，學生們就不用擔心，按照題目中的提綱來敘述即可。難點有兩個：首先是英語的表達習慣與漢語是不同的，要注意語法的規(guī)范，使用正確的時態(tài)和人稱，多使用簡單句，保證句子的準確，并點綴幾個并列句或復合句，調(diào)整文章的節(jié)奏。其次需要注意文章表達的連貫性和流暢，句子之間使用連接成分，如連詞或副詞等。