Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

初中生活即將結(jié)束。在這三年里你的生活中定不乏難以忘懷的人或事，請(qǐng)以“An unforgettable in my school life”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。講述

一個(gè)你最難忘的人或事。

要求: 1.請(qǐng)補(bǔ)全題目，如teacher. classmate或trip等:

2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校姓名;

3.語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,短文連貫通順，80詞左右。

Answer 1

【答案】An unforgettable teacher in my school life

For these three years, I regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers. She not only helps me with my English but also cares for me in life. When I first learned English ,I dared not talk in her class because of my pronunciation. She taught me how to pronounce the words correctly again and again with patience. After class , she gave me lots of advice on how to learn English well. Now I can speak English as well as my classmates. She looks after me like my mother while I am busy studying. We have fun doing sports together .She is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school life.

【解析】

本篇是話(huà)題作文，介紹自己難忘的人或事。

1.本篇要求學(xué)生自己補(bǔ)全題目，確定寫(xiě)作的目標(biāo)，寫(xiě)自己3年初中校園生活里難忘的人或事，描述難忘的人用第三人稱(chēng)，講述過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾一般性闡述，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)要圍繞中心“unforgettable”，敘述清楚具體的事件或情節(jié)，文章結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰明了，注意短語(yǔ)、句型的正確使用。

2.本篇例文敘述難忘的英語(yǔ)老師，開(kāi)頭句“regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers.”直入主題，正文部分詳細(xì)描述了老師如何耐心的多方面的幫助自己，結(jié)尾句.She is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school life.呼應(yīng)中心詞unforgettable。整篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，緊扣主題，前呼后應(yīng)。

3.高分亮點(diǎn)：巧用連詞， not only…but also，because of as well as，so…that…句子得以有機(jī)結(jié)合；短語(yǔ)how to do sth，teach sb to do sth，care for也為文章的語(yǔ)言增色不少。