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【題目】【山東省德州市二O一五年初中學業(yè)水平考試英語試題】書面表達（共1題，計20分）

新學期開始，某學校的學生社團又開始拓荒了。假設你是社團負責人，請根據以下內容和要求寫一篇80－100詞的英語宣傳員，為新同學介紹下列社團的情況（包括名稱、活動內容及其目的）。

Good Players English Lovers

watch matches speak to foreigners

do one h ‘s sports every day talk about good ways to learn English

keep fit improve your English

Excellent Cooks

design healthy

learn to cook

have a healthy life

要求：

1. 自擬第四個社團，包括名稱、活動內容及其目的，不少于2句；

2.語言通順，要點齊全，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；

3. 文中不得出現真實的姓名和學校名稱；

4. 文章開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

Welcome to Our Clubs

Boys and girls,

Welcome to our school. Now let me introduce some of our clubs to you. _______

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These are the most popular clubs in our school and I hope you can join us.

Answer 1

【答案】

Welcome to our Clubs

Welcome to our school. Now let me introduce some of our clubs to you.

Cool Players is a good choice for sports lovers. Here you can do sports one hour a day to build your body and watch sports matches. If you are interested in English, English Lovers is a good choice. In the club, you can speak to foreigners and talk about good ways to learn English. I hope you can make friends with other English lovers. Do you want to be a good cook? In Excellent Cooks, you will learn how to design healthy menus and cook dishes, which can lead to a healthy life. If you are interested in books, Smart Readers is a good choice. Reading good books and writing reading notes are useful to improve your knowledge and open up your eyes.

These are the most popular clubs in our school and I hope you can join us.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們以學校社團負責人的身份，在新學期開始的時候，為新同學們介紹一下各個社團的情況，題目中給出了我們三個社團Cool Player, English lover和Excellent cooks，還給出了這幾個社團的一些基本情況，我們需要用正確的英語將這些內容表達出來。另外我們還需要自己補充第四個社團的名稱和它的活動內容以及目的，這就需要我們自己發(fā)揮想象力來完成這一部分的內容。通過分析可知，這篇短文我們應主要使用一般現在時態(tài)，第二人稱you來敘述。寫作時，要注意表達合乎英語的規(guī)范，注意語句之間的連接，盡量使用一些好的詞匯、句型和短語，增強文章的表現力，使文章意思更加連貫，表達更加流暢。

寫作亮點：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。短文中作者按照題目的要求給我們介紹了學校的三個社團的活動內容，又發(fā)揮想象力補充了第四個社團Smart Readers,內容完整，要點全面，語句通順，符合題目要求。短文中作者使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，句式表達符合英語的規(guī)范。作者還使用了一些較好的句型和句式，如if引導的條件狀語從句，If you are interested in English、If you are interested in books等；還用到了一些較好的短語，如a good choice for sports lovers、Here you can do sports one hour a day to build your body、talk about good ways to learn English、you will learn how to design healthy menus and cook dishes、Reading good books and writing reading notes are useful to improve your knowledge and open up your eyes等。這些句型的使用從整體上提高了作文的檔次，顯示了作者較高的寫作能力。