Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

越來越多的汽車進(jìn)入了我們的家庭，改善了我們的生活，但同時也帶來了很多問題，如塞車和車禍，給家庭和社會帶來極大危害。作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢?

請寫一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文(100詞左右)

內(nèi)容提示：

1.遵守交通規(guī)則，如走人行道/過斑馬線。

2.別在街道或馬路上玩耍和踢球。

3.勸父母不能酒后駕車。

你可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，讓短文通順，過渡自然。

參考詞匯：sidewalk人行道zebra-crossing斑馬線

注：第一段已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù) 。

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life.

Answer 1

【答案】With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.

Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra-crossing, stop, look right and left, and then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road. we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving.

We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safely driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹作為中學(xué)生，面對汽車帶來的問題，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：we are happy that……，it has……，Traffic safety is……，We must……，we can……..等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。