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【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

假如你是John，你校試行在課間播放音樂(lè)．你班同學(xué)對(duì)此講行了討論．看法不一大多數(shù)同學(xué)贊同，而部分同學(xué)反對(duì)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中所提供的信息；給你們的校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)封信。介紹大家的觀點(diǎn)。同時(shí)談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/span>

	贊同者	反對(duì)者
原因	1音樂(lè)給人們帶來(lái)快樂(lè)。 2使大腦得到放松。 3能提高下一節(jié)課的學(xué)習(xí)效率。	l課間時(shí)間太短，播放音樂(lè)達(dá)不到預(yù)期效果。 2有時(shí)上課還沉浸在課間音樂(lè)中，對(duì)上課有影響。
你的 觀點(diǎn)	自擬l一2個(gè)觀點(diǎn)

要求：1詞數(shù)90左右。信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好．不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2完整表達(dá)表中所示內(nèi)容，句式規(guī)范，字跡工整。

3可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使條理清晰，內(nèi)容完整，意思連貫，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名

4參考詞匯：學(xué)習(xí)效率study efficiency；預(yù)期的expected；沉浸在……中be lost in。

Dear Headmaster,

We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in

our class gave their ideas.

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Yours sincerely,

John

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Headmaster,

We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave their ideas.

Most of us agree that the music should be played. They think listening to music can make them feel happy. Besides, music helps them relax after hard work. What's more. music can help them improve the study efficiency.

On the other hand, some students disagree. They doubt whether they can get expected results by listening to music, as the break is short. In addition, in class some students are still lost in music, which has a bad effect on students.

I think what we need is peace instead of the noise produced by the music. So I don't like music. What's your idea?

Yours sincerely,

John

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，給我們的校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)封信，介紹大家對(duì)課間播放音樂(lè)的討論，同時(shí)談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā＝Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Most of us agree that……，They think……，They doubt……，I think……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。