Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

動物和人類共處一個(gè)世界，是人類的朋友。有的動物美麗，有的動物可愛，有的動物活潑，有的動物靦腆。你喜歡哪種動物？為什么？請寫一篇60詞左右的短文介紹你最喜歡的動物。題目和開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

My favorite animal

There are many animals in the world. But _________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】My favorite animal

There are many animals in the world. But what's my favorite animal, do you know？ Many people like her very much. I also like her. She is from China. She looks kind of lazy but very cute. She is our friend. She likes to eat bamboos. She is very friendly to people. She is black and white. She has two black ears and eyes. And she also has black legs and arms.

Now do you know what the animal is? Yes, she is a panda. I like her because she is a symbol of friendship. And I tell my classmates that my favorite animal is a clever and very beautiful panda.

【解析】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如in the world，very much，be from，kind of，like to do，be friendly to，black and white，a symbol of friendship，tell sb. sth.等。而But what's my favorite animal, do you know？/I like her because she is a symbol of friendship./And I tell my classmates that my favorite animal is a clever and very beautiful panda.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，使得內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。