Question

7．根據(jù)提示內容，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，首句已經(jīng)給出不計入總詞數(shù)．
要求：1．姓名：Joy Smith
2．年齡：14
3．生日：十月一日
4．家庭成員：爺爺奶奶，爸爸媽媽，一個妹妹
5．好朋友：Mary and Jim
6．愛好：包括運動，食物，學習科目及其原因
I have a friend．His name is Joy Smith，he is 14 years old，his birthday is on October 1st，there are six people in his family，his grandparents，his parents，his sister and he．He has two good friends，they are Mary and Jim，they are in the same class．He likes sports，he likes playing basketball and he oftens plays basketball after shcool with his friends．He likes healthy food such as fruits and vegetables．His favorite subject is English because he thinks it is interesting．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
there are six people in his family．他家有六口人．這是一個there be句型，表示某地有某物．
高分句型二
His favorite subject is English because he thinks it is interesting．他最喜歡的科目是英語，因為他認為它很有趣．這是because引導的原因狀語從句，因為…．

解答 His name is Joy Smith【要點一，姓名】，he is 14 years old【要點二，年齡】，his birthday is on October 1st【要點三，生日】，there are six people in his family【高分句型一，注意there be句型的使用】，his grandparents，his parents，his sister and he【要點四，家庭成員】．He has two good friends，they are Mary and Jim，they are in the same class．【要點五，好朋友】He likes sports，he likes playing basketball and he oftens plays basketball after school with his friends．He likes healthy food such as fruits and vegetables．His favorite subject is English because he thinks it is interesting【高分句型二，注意狀語從句的使用】．【要點六，愛好】

點評 動筆前應先認真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內容，確定主要短語，句式等問題．注意不要遺漏要點，句子要通順連貫，沒有語法錯誤．