Question

12．假設(shè)你是葉偉，請你根據(jù)所給信息提示給你在美國的筆友James寫信，介紹你的學習和生活．要求呈現(xiàn)所有要點、語法正確、語言流暢、語意通順、上下文連貫、書寫工整．字數(shù)：70-80詞

Dear James， Thanks for your letter．Do you want to know something about my life？ I have a regular and busy daily life on weekdays．I get up early at about 6：00 in the morning．After breakfast，I go to school by bike．We usually have a morning class and four classes in the morning，four classes in the afternoon．I take an active part in the after-school activities．I usually play football with my friends for about an hour then I go home．After supper I do my homework，then I surf the internet and listen to some music．On weekends，I usually visit my friends and grandparents．Sometimes I go to movies with my parents． Best wishes， Ye Wei

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分析 高分句型：
①Do you want to know something about my life，你想知道一些關(guān)于我的生活嗎．句子中want to do sth表示想做某事，后面跟to引導的不定式形式．
②I take an active part in the after-school activities．我積極參加課外活動．句子中take an active part in 表示積極參加，after-school activities表示課外活動．

解答 Dear James，
Thanks for your letter．Do you want to know something about my life（高分句型）？（引出話題）
I have a regular and busy daily life on weekdays．（什么樣的學習和生活） I get up early at about 6：00 in the morning．After breakfast，I go to school by bike．We usually have a morning class and four classes in the morning，four classes in the afternoon．I take an active part in the after-school activities（高分句型）．I usually play football with my friends for about an hour then I go home．After supper I do my homework，then I surf the internet and listen to some music．On weekends，I usually visit my friends and grandparents．Sometimes I go to movies with my parents．（具體介紹我的學習和生活）
Best wishes，
Ye Wei

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