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【題目】書面表達

“綠色城市，健康生活”是我們共同的生活目標。假如你校英語�？�最近就此話題進行征文，請你根據(jù)以下提示內(nèi)容寫一篇不少于100詞的英語短文來投稿。短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

提示內(nèi)容：1. 呼吁大家為“綠色城市，健康生活”的目標而努力；

2．寫自己為實現(xiàn)這一目標打算如何做。

Hello，everyone. We share a common home______________________________

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

Hello，everyone. We share a common home—Hefei. We should help build a green city so that we can live a healthy life. Let's work hard for it together.

To have a good environment，I'm going to ride a bicycle to school and ask people around me to drive their cars less to reduce air pollution. Then I will plant more trees with friends and recycle waste to help protect the natural environment. Moreover，I should use cloth bags for shopping，not plastic bags. What's more，I can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when I brush my teeth. Remember that everyone can do something to make a difference!

【解析】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如help do，build a green city，live a healthy life，work hard，be going to，ride a bicycle，ask sb. to do，people around me，what's more，save water，turn off，make a difference等。而復雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)To have a good environment，I'm going to ride a bicycle to school and ask people around me to drive their cars less to reduce air pollution.和We should help build a green city so that we can live a healthy life. / Remember that everyone can do something to make a difference!等復雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，又使表達很有層次感，是本文的最大亮點。在學習中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。