Question

近日，《中國健康月刊》對全國1306 名15 歲以下學(xué)生進行了調(diào)查，發(fā)現(xiàn)40.74%的孩子
有齲齒。為此，在全國牙齒關(guān)愛日到來前，請你根據(jù)以下要點，結(jié)合自己的體會，給校報英
語專欄寫一篇短文，談?wù)勅绾伪Ｗo牙齒。
1. 每天早晚刷牙； 2. 有蛀牙及早看醫(yī)生；3. 有齙牙可戴牙套;  4. 健康飲食（蔬菜、水果……）。注意：1. 詞數(shù)：80 詞左右；開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2. 應(yīng)覆蓋所有要點；可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；3. 參考詞匯： tooth decay 蛀牙；crooked teeth 齙牙; braces n. 牙套。
Teeth problems are common among children. A study on China Health Monthly recently showed that 40.74% of 1,306 Chinese students under age 15 had decayed teeth.
 
 

Answer 1

Teeth problems are common among children. A study on China Health Monthly recently showed that 40.74% of 1,306 Chinese students under age 15 had decayed teeth. Here are some ways to project your teeth
First, it's really necessary for you to brush your teeth twice a day at least -morning and night. Second, if you have tooth decay, you should go to the doctor's for help as soon as possible. Third, using braces is a wise choice if your teeth arc crooked. Finally, try to have a healthy diet taking more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food.
In a word, if you care much about tooth health, you'll be better from tooth problems.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第二人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:強調(diào)句式It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事對某人來說怎么樣；as soon as一……就……；等。序數(shù)詞first等的使用是本文看起來更加條理清楚，符合邏輯關(guān)系。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用, 讓文章更出彩。