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隨著我市創(chuàng)衛(wèi)工作的不斷推進(jìn)，鹽城已成為一個(gè)具有現(xiàn)代化氣息的城市, 它吸引著許多游客來(lái)此旅游、投資、學(xué)習(xí)。展示鹽城人民的精神風(fēng)貌是每一位鹽城人的職責(zé)。請(qǐng)以  “To Be Lovely Yanchengnese為題寫一篇短文。
要點(diǎn)如下：
社會(huì)公德 (如：主動(dòng)讓座、遵守交通規(guī)則、助人為樂(lè))
環(huán)境保護(hù) (如：保護(hù)花草樹(shù)木、節(jié)約能源)
公共禮儀 (如：在公共場(chǎng)所不抽煙、不大聲喧嘩、不亂扔垃圾)
作為學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該……（不少于兩點(diǎn)）
參考詞語(yǔ)：遵守交通規(guī)則 obey the traffic rules, 花草樹(shù)木 plants and trees
注意：不要逐句翻譯以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
詞數(shù)： 80左右，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞總數(shù)。
To Be Lovely Yanchengnese
Yancheng is developing quickly. It has become a modern city. To be lovely Yanchengnese, we should try our best to show its beauty. We should
 
 
 

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To Be Lovely Yanchengnese
Yancheng is developing quickly. It has become a modern city. To be lovely Yanchengnese, we should try our best to show its beauty. We should o anything from ourselves ,such as not waste water or electic power and so on.  As middle school students,we can also do a lot of helpful things. For example,we can protect it by not throwing rubbish away. We can use materials which do no harm to the enviornment.Besides it, we should persuade people joining us as much as posible. If everyone can do this our world will be more beatiful and tomorrow is another day.
Let's do our best to make our city more and more beautiful.

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如：such as；for example；as much as possible；and so on；more and more等等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。