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【題目】書面表達(dá)。奧黛麗·赫本是一位享譽(yù)國際的明星，假設(shè)她是你最喜歡的明星，請根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)用英語寫一篇短文。

Personal details	Name	Audrey Hepburn
	Date of birth	4 May 1929
	Place of birth	Belgium
	Talents	A great actress, a great beauty and a great humanitarian
Acting career	⒈dreamed of becoming a ballet dancer at a very young age
	⒉worked as a model before an actress
	⒊won many awards, some famous works Gigi(1951): the beginning of her successful career Roman Holiday(1952): a big success, the Oscar for Best Actress for her role Ondine(1954): a Tony Award Wait Until Dark(1967), Breakfast at Tiffany's(1961), The Nun's Story(1959), Sabrina(1954): four more Oscar nominations. ...
Charity work	devoted much of her time to..., worked closely with UNCEF..., be presented with the the Presidential Medal of Freedom...
Your opinion	...is considered as..., I love her because..., ...

注意： 1．短文須包括以上內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順、意思連貫，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2．100個(gè)詞左右。

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【答案】Audrey Hepburn is my favourite star.She was born on May 4th, 1929,in Belgium. She is a great actress, a great beauty and a great humanitarian.She dreamed of becoming a ballet dancer at a very young age.And she worked as a model before an actress.She won many awards and some famous works. The beginning of her successful career is in 1951,in Gigi. She had a big success, the Oscar for Best Actress for her role during Roman Holiday, in 1952.She won a Tony Award in 1954,during Ondine.She attended Wait Until Dark in 1967,Breakfast at Tiffany's in 1961,The Nun's Story in 1959.She earned four more Oscar nominations in Sabrina in 1954. She devoted much of her time to charity work.She worked closely with UNCEF.She was presented with the the Presidential Medal of Freedom.She is considered as my favourite star,I love her because she devoted much of her time to charity work.
【解析】這篇作文是一個(gè)表格式的提綱作文，介紹自己最喜愛的明星Audrey Hepburn。主要使用一般現(xiàn)在和一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第三人稱單數(shù)。首先作者介紹了赫本的個(gè)人信息。然后又介紹了她的演藝生涯和她所做的慈善工作，最后給出了自己的觀點(diǎn)。用表格內(nèi)所給的提綱把關(guān)于赫本的信息完整地表達(dá)了出來。寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如She devoted much of her time to charity work.She worked closely with UNCEF.She was presented with the the Presidential Medal of Freedom.等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。