Question

【題目】書面表達

請以“My trip to Suzhou”為題寫篇作文，要點如下：

1.旅游是一項非常好的活動,可以欣賞大自然。

2.上周末我和家人一起乘長途汽車去蘇州度假了。旅途花費了一個多小時，我們在那兒呆了2天。

3.蘇州是個美麗的城市，有許多名勝。近年來，蘇州已發(fā)生了許多變化. 過去是。。。。。�，F(xiàn)在。。。。。。人們住進新公寓，有電腦和Internet。通過網(wǎng)絡，你可以方便快速地搜索到想要去得地方，你甚至可以在網(wǎng)上一個半小時游遍蘇州。

4第一天我們在那兒欣賞中國第一大國家園林，情不自禁拍了許多照片；第二天購物，物美價廉，給我的親戚和朋友買了許多禮物；

5我們玩的很開心。。。。。。

要求：1）條理清楚、語句通順；

2內(nèi)容包括相關信息，省略部分要得當并適當發(fā)揮；

3）詞數(shù)：90字左右

4）不得使用真實姓名和班級等。

Answer 1

【答案】

Traveling is a very good activity, you can enjoy the beauty of nature and relax yourself.

Last weekend, I went to Suzhou for a holiday by coach with my family. It took us more than an hour to get there, and we stayed there for 2 days.

Suzhou is a beautiful city with many places of interest. In recent years, a lot of changes have taken place in Suzhou. In the past, the roads were narrow and dirty, the rubbish was everywhere. Now the streets are wide and clean. There are many shops and tall buildings on both sides of the trees. People live in new apartments with computers and Internet. Through the network, you can quickly and easily find the place you want to go, you can even travel 1.5 hours online in Suzhou.

On the first day, we enjoyed the first big country garden in China, and couldn’t help taking a lot of pictures. The next day we went shopping, the goods there are cheap and good, we bought a lot of gifts for my relatives and friends.

We all had a good time, I will never forget the meaningful experience.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，要求以“My trip to Suzhou”為題寫篇作文，介紹一個注明的旅游城市。材料中給的資料比較全面，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮，確定時態(tài)主要詞匯等問題。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。另外，在描述時，應該注意人稱的變化。

寫作亮點：這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者緊緊圍繞提供的幾個寫作要點，把握寫作方向。人稱轉換及時態(tài)把握的都很準確。結構清晰，要點全面。