Question

無(wú)錫地鐵一號(hào)線將于2014年6月投入使用，這是無(wú)錫人民生活中的一件大事，對(duì)此許多人發(fā)表了自己的看法。作為一名校英語(yǔ)報(bào)記者，請(qǐng)據(jù)此在答題卷指定的位置上寫一篇80詞左右的英文報(bào)道。內(nèi)容提示如下：
乘坐地鐵更快捷方便，安全性能更高，地鐵票價(jià)不是很貴；
如果人們不開(kāi)自備車而改乘地鐵，可以緩解交通擁堵，減少大氣和噪音污染，有利于環(huán)境保護(hù)；
地鐵能為人們出行提供多一種選擇；
你的看法。
要求：1. 報(bào)道必須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫；
2. 第4要點(diǎn)用2~3句展開(kāi)合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3. 報(bào)道開(kāi)頭已在答題卷上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Wuxi Underground Line 1 will be in use in June, 2014. Many people think
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Answer 1

Wuxi underground line 1 will be in use in June, 2014. Some people think it’s faster and easier to take the underground and it is much safer. One underground ticket is not very expensive. If people go out by underground instead of driving their own cars, the road will be less crowded. And there will be less air and noise pollution, too. So, it is good for protecting the environment. Luckily, people will have one more choice to go to other places. I think underground is great. I will choose to go by underground and I hope more people will take underground.

試題分析：這是篇命題作文。題中給出了寫作要點(diǎn)和要求。寫作時(shí)，一定要按照要求注意要點(diǎn)的齊全。表述時(shí)句子要連貫，可使用一些連接性的句子和短語(yǔ)，增加文章的邏輯性。
【亮點(diǎn)分析】
這篇作文要點(diǎn)齊全，表述準(zhǔn)確流利。文章使用了一些很有用的表達(dá)方式和句型，例如：If people go out by underground instead of driving their own cars, the road will be less crowded.如果人們坐地鐵出行而不是開(kāi)私家車，那么道路就不會(huì)那么擁擠了。If引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句；instead of而不是。So, it is good for protecting the environment.所以，這有利于保護(hù)環(huán)境。Be good for對(duì)……有利。