Question

最近你校校園網(wǎng)上出現(xiàn)了一個(gè)英語(yǔ)帖子，意在了解同學(xué)們?cè)隗w育愛(ài)好、藝術(shù)特長(zhǎng)等方面的情況，請(qǐng)你用“李華”這一網(wǎng)名，根據(jù)以下三個(gè)提示回貼。
提示：(1) What’s your favorite …?
(2) What do you often do in your spare time?
(3) What’s your advice to your teacher or school so that you can improve your skill?
要求：(1) 回帖中須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
(2) 回帖中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。
(3) 詞數(shù)：60～80個(gè)。
Li Hua, 11:00 Apr.16
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Answer 1

One possible version:
I like sports and my favorite sport is basketball. Every day I practice basketball with my classmates after school. I also enjoy listening to music but I can’t sing well. I’m afraid to sing in front of people. I hope our school will start a singing club. I’m sure I can make great progress with the help of our teachers. I also hope there will be less homework on weekends. Then I can have more time to do what I’m interested in.

試題分析：1.本文應(yīng)該以第一人稱書(shū)寫(xiě)，但不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和人名。2.要正確表達(dá)每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏，當(dāng)然也可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不能脫離主題。3.本文主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。4.詞數(shù)為60-80個(gè)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了also、and、but、Then等詞，使得前后句子聯(lián)系緊密，過(guò)渡自然。主從復(fù)合句I’m sure I can make great progress with the help of our teachers.和Then I can have more time to do what I’m interested in.也使用的很好。