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17．隨著全球環(huán)境的惡化，越來(lái)越多的人選擇過(guò)"低碳生活（low-carbon life）"，即減少二氧化碳的排放，低能量﹑低消耗﹑低開(kāi)支的生活．請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇英文倡議書(shū)，倡議你的同學(xué)們加入"低碳一族"，為環(huán)保做出貢獻(xiàn)．提示要點(diǎn)如下：
1．用手洗衣服；
2．多走樓梯，少用電梯；
3．去超市自備購(gòu)物袋；
4．步行或者騎自行車(chē)上學(xué)；
5．…
注意：1．詞數(shù)：120-150左右．
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
With the global warming getting worse，more people choose to live a low-carbon life for the purpose of reducing greenhouse gases．As students，we have the responsibility to change our lifestyle to fit the world better．The following are some small things that may lead to big improvement of the environment．
Firstly，wash your clothes by hand instead of using washing machines．Secondly，don't take elevators unless it is necessary，using stairs does good to both your health and the environment．Thirdly，remember to bring your own shopping bags when you go to the supermarket．Lastly，go to school on foot or by bicycle．Buses produce carbon，too．
Let's take action and be low-carbon people!．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是寫(xiě)一篇英文倡議書(shū)，倡議你的同學(xué)們加入"低碳一族"，為環(huán)保做出貢獻(xiàn)．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一，二人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．用手洗衣服；
2．多走樓梯，少用電梯；
3．去超市自備購(gòu)物袋；
4．步行或者騎自行車(chē)上學(xué)；
5，其他
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
instead of 而不是
do good to 對(duì)…有益
remember to do sth 記得去做某事
take action 采取行動(dòng)
【高分句型】
1．The following are some small things that may lead to big improvement of the environment．
that作為關(guān)系詞的定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞things，that作為從句的主語(yǔ)．
2．Secondly，don't take elevators①u(mài)nless it is necessary，②using stairs③does good to④both your health and the environment．
①u(mài)nless引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句是祈使句，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．
②動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)做主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)does．
③do good to 對(duì)…有益
④both…and…兩者都
3．Thirdly，①remember to bring your own shopping bags ②when you go to the supermarket．
①remember to do sth 記得去做某事
②when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 With the global warming getting worse，more people choose to live a low-carbon life for the purpose of reducing greenhouse gases．As students，we have the responsibility to change our lifestyle to fit the world better．The following are some small things that may lead to big improvement of the environment．【高分句型】
Firstly，wash your clothes by hand instead of using washing machines．（用手洗衣服）Secondly，don't take elevators unless it is necessary，using stairs does good to both your health and the environment．【高分句型】（多走樓梯，少用電梯）Thirdly，remember to bring your own shopping bags when you go to the supermarket．【高分句型】（去超市自備購(gòu)物袋）Lastly，go to school on foot or by bicycle．Buses produce carbon，too．（步行或者騎自行車(chē)上學(xué)）
Let's take action and be low-carbon people!（號(hào)召）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇倡議書(shū)，內(nèi)容具有時(shí)代性，生活性和可寫(xiě)性．要求學(xué)生根據(jù)現(xiàn)在的情況，倡議同學(xué)們加入低碳一族．作文要包含所有中文提示，可根據(jù)主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．該文章審題容易，學(xué)生切入容易，但要取得高分，學(xué)生要適當(dāng)運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯，句型和各種連接詞