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2．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文．要求語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確．省略號(hào)處需要補(bǔ)充．
80詞左右．
1．班上有些同學(xué)感到學(xué)習(xí)壓力大，以至過(guò)分緊張；
2．癥狀：夜晚休息不好，課上精力不能集中，…
3．你認(rèn)為產(chǎn)生壓力的主要原因：第一、課多，作業(yè)多．第二、…
4．解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題的辦法：我們應(yīng)該自信、放松，仔細(xì)計(jì)劃時(shí)間，…

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
it takes them five or six hours to finish the homework．他們花了五個(gè)或六個(gè)小時(shí)完成作業(yè)．  it takes some time to do sth．做某事花費(fèi)…時(shí)間．
  高分句型二
 we should plan our time carefully so that we can have more time to rest．我們應(yīng)該仔細(xì)計(jì)劃時(shí)間以便我們有更多的時(shí)間休息．so that  為了，以便于，引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Some students are stressed out because of the learning pressure，【要點(diǎn)一，班上有些同學(xué)感到學(xué)習(xí)壓力大，以至過(guò)分緊張】they can't sleep well at night and can't concentrate on their lessons．Some of them even have a headache and can't go to school【要點(diǎn)二，癥狀】．I think there are two reasons，the first one is they have too much homework every day，it takes them five or six hours to finish the homework【高分句型一，注意it takes some time to do sth．句型的使用】，they can't go to bed untill 12 o'clock at night．The other reason is their parents always compare their children with others．【要點(diǎn)三，主要原因】We should be confident and try to relax ourselves，and we should plan our time carefully so that we can have more time to rest【高分句型二，注意狀語(yǔ)從句的使用】．【要點(diǎn)四，解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題的辦法】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．