Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

某報(bào)社正在就“The person who I admire most”為題進(jìn)行征文比賽。假設(shè)你的叔叔對你的學(xué)習(xí)生活影響非常大，你非常欽佩你的叔叔。請你根據(jù)表格提供的有關(guān)叔叔的信息和要求寫一篇文章向該報(bào)社投稿。.

職業(yè)	作家	年齡	三十幾歲
品質(zhì)	有條理	從不忘記他需要做的事
	勤奮	熬夜，做額外的工作
	樂于助人	獻(xiàn)血妤幾次 (…請?jiān)倥e一例)
最愛的顏色	紅色	象征…
對我的幫助	傾聽我的煩惱，告訴我不要放棄 (請自己再發(fā)揮一條)

注意：1. 開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2. 詞數(shù)不少于80字，可以根據(jù)要求作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

The person who I admire most

I would like to talk about my Uncle Tom who I admire most.

Answer 1

【答案】The person who I admire most

He is a writer. Now he is in his thirties. He is a person with great patience, and he never forgets the things he has to do. He is very diligent. He always stays up late and does the extra work. More importantly, he is always ready to help others. He often looks after old people in Old People’s Home. He has ever donated her blood for several times. Red is his favorite color, because it stands for energetic. When I am feeling sad, it is my uncle who listens to me carefully. When I have some difficulties in my studies, it is also my uncle who encourages me not to give up until I solve the problem. I love my uncle.

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文。文中給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了開頭。我們要做的是用正確的英語把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，說出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知，本文主要以第三人單數(shù)，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文緊密聯(lián)系，符合邏輯關(guān)系。本人內(nèi)容合理，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，段落清晰，要點(diǎn)齊全，多次運(yùn)用固定短語以及復(fù)合句。如：be ready to do, to one’s surprise, when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句，who引導(dǎo)的定語從句等，為文章增色不少。