【題目】我的好同學李偉自從上個月得了白血病、住院以來,家里已花光了所有的錢。但遠遠不夠,還需要大量的錢動手術(shù)。他的父母都是農(nóng)民,家里太窮而不能維持下去。為了幫助他們解決錢的困難,我們學校將組織一次慈善義演,通過不同節(jié)目的表演,為他捐錢、為他提供更好的藥物治療。使他早日恢復健康,重返學校。我們都認為做這件事是特別有意義的。

要求:1.包括以上要點,不需要逐句翻譯,可適當發(fā)揮;

2.表達清楚,語法正確;

3.80詞左右,開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)

【答案】My classmate is ill.He has spent all the money at home.But he still needs a lot of money.He has no more money because his parents are farmers.They are too poor to support the family.Our school will organize a charity show.Through different programs, let people donate money for him in order to provide better drug treatments.We hope he will recover soon so that he goes to school again.I think it is helpful to do the thing.

【解析】本篇作文屬于要點型作文,表達了“一方有難八方支援”的思想。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容,準確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯?蛇m當?shù)脑黾忧楣?jié)使行文連貫。

【亮點說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀作文,很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達符合英語習慣,準確運用了時態(tài)、主謂一致,特別是一些亮點詞句,如too...to..., support, recover等以及連接詞because, in order to, so that等,增加邏輯關(guān)系,增強上下文意思的連貫性,用詞準確,句子通順,行文連貫。

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