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A Good Friend In My Mind

英國有句諺語：結(jié)識新朋友，不忘老朋友，老朋友是金，新朋友是銀(Make new friends, but keep the old; Those are silver, these are gold. )。中國自古亦有“有朋自遠方來，不亦樂乎？”等描繪朋友之間友情的名句。初中的學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束了，在這段時間里你一定結(jié)識了許多朋友，并產(chǎn)生了深厚的友誼。請你寫一篇文章介紹一位你心目中的好朋友。文章必須包含以下內(nèi)容：1. 人物簡介；2. 給你的幫助；3. 你的感受。

要求： 1）條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，標(biāo)點正確、邏輯清晰；

2）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名；

3）80詞左右。（開頭已給出，不計入總次數(shù)。）

A life without friends is like a life without the sun. Nobody can live alone in the world….

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【答案】

A Good Friend In My Mind

A life without friends is like a life without the sun. Nobody can live alone in the world.I deeply believe that everyone has their most important people in their lifetime. For me, that's my classmate, Tom.I still remember that once my leg was badly hurt in a football match, and I had to stay in bed for two weeks. While I was worried about school work at home, my classmate Tom came to help me. He told me what the teacher taught in class, and helped me a lot with my math problems. I was deeply moved because he kept teaching me until I returned to school. I was glad that I caught up with my classmates.From then on, we became best friends. I truly understood that a friend in need is a friend in deed.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于開放性文體，能夠很大程度上調(diào)動學(xué)生的想象空間，學(xué)生可以結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，首先對每個人在他們心中都有一個重要的人物，這個現(xiàn)象進行肯定，接下來結(jié)合自己的一次經(jīng)歷，說明他是如何幫助我的，如何給了最深的印象。最后對自己所經(jīng)歷的事情的感受進行描寫。

【亮點說明】文中考查了學(xué)生連詞成句的能力外，還要求學(xué)生能夠變換句式，學(xué)會用不同的表達，來表達同一個意思，要在“準(zhǔn)”字和“美”上下功夫。在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動詞時態(tài)等諸多方面，同時要學(xué)會多用副詞來修飾謂語動詞，這樣顯示出深厚的語言根底。 注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子進行默寫，考試時就能寫出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文。