Question

【題目】善待他人是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“團結友善”為

主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請你用英文寫一篇短文投稿，說說你對善待

他人的看法，你曾經(jīng)友善待人的經(jīng)歷，以及你的感受。

提示詞語： important, help, happy

提示問題： ● What do you think of being kind to others?

● What did you do?

● How do you feel?

Being kind to others is a traditional virtue (美德) of Chinese people. ______

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Answer 1

【答案】Being kind to others is a traditional virtue of Chinese people. I think it’s very

important for everyone. When I started middle school, my friend Peter failed in the

English exam last year. He was so sad that he wanted to give up. When I knew this, I

encouraged him and gave him some advice. Every day we did homework together,

when he met some difficult English problems, I would help him to work them out.

Little by little, with my help, he improved his English skills. At the end of this term,

he made a great progress. He was very happy, I was also proud.

【解析】

試題

本題要求談談對善待他人的看法，曾經(jīng)友善待人的經(jīng)歷，以及你的感受。短文要覆蓋提示的所有要點，并適當發(fā)揮。文中正確使用時態(tài)（過去時）來描述過去的經(jīng)歷以進行表達，使用第一人稱形式進行寫作。但也要注意在總結自己的感受，談論觀點的時候要使用一般現(xiàn)在時表明看法。

寫作亮點：

短文開始就引入話題；提出了善待別人是傳統(tǒng)美德，借助動名詞做主語（Being kind to others is…），之后介紹了一段自己的經(jīng)歷，表意清晰，中心明確，動詞過去時使用正確。有幾個短語和結構的使用堪稱亮點，如：so…that…; give up, give sb some advice, work out, little by little, with my help，豐富的短語交錯使用，使得故事表達清晰具體，切合主題，主旨鮮明突出。