Question

15．青少年是祖國的未來，也是城市的名片．在創(chuàng)建全國文明城市的過程中，我市舉辦了"美德少年"評選活動．假如你是"美德少年"的爭創(chuàng)者，請根據下列表格中的提示，以"Be a virtue teenager，build a civilized city"為題，用英語寫一份倡議書，號召大家積極爭做"美德少年"，為港城添彩．

主題	做"美德少年"，創(chuàng)文明城市
內容	待人方面：尊老愛幼，友好互助 言談方面：語言文明，耐心傾聽 出行方面：遵守交規(guī)，主動禮讓
你的觀點	聯(lián)系實際，談談你的觀點（至少兩點）

注意：90詞左右．短文標題和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數．
文中不得提及有關考生的個人的身份的任何信息，如：校名，人名等．
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
we should try our best to study hard and obey all the school rules我應該盡力去努力學習遵守校規(guī)．
try one's best to do sth盡力做某事
【高分句型二】
I hope everyone will join us and try to be a virtue teenager我希望每個人都能加入我們盡力成為一個美德少年．
hope后加賓語從句

解答 Be a virtue teenager，build a civilized city
   Being a teenager of Lianyungang，what should we do to help build a civilized city？（主題） Firstly，when in public places，we should respect the elderly and take care of the young．We should also be friendly and helpful to others； Secondly，when having a conversation，we should speak politely and be patient enough to listen； Thirdly，when on the road，we should obey the traffic rules and give seats when necessary．（內容）
    As s junior students，I think it's our duty to do as the above．At the same time，we should try our best to study hard and obey all the school rules．【高分句型一】In this way，we can be a virtue teenager and help to build our city into a civilized one．I hope everyone will join us and try to be a virtue teenager．【高分句型二】（我的觀點）

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