Question

【題目】書面表達

請根據(jù)下面的英文短詩，展開適當(dāng)?shù)南胂螅瑢懸黄獦?biāo)題為“My teacher,Miss Kelly”的短文，描述你的老師。

My teacher,Miss Kelly

Tall,pretty and bright,

Always encourages us to try.

She leads us to a world of“why”,

We all love her from inside.

寫作要求：

1.不得照抄短詩原文，并結(jié)合短詩的內(nèi)容，發(fā)揮想象，適當(dāng)展開。

2.必須突出短詩的主題，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫。

3.短文不能寫成詩歌形式。

4.詞數(shù)：80左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】Miss Kelly is my English teacher. Of all my teachers, she is one of the best, because she is tall, pretty and bright. She often pays more attention to her way of teaching. She tries different ways to make her classes lively and interesting. In her opinion, we should not only know “what”, but also understand “why”. So, she never just gives us answers immediately, but encourages us to think by ourselves. With her help, we’ve learned how to solve problems. What a wonderful world of “why” she leads us to!

She is such a great person that we all love her from inside of our hearts.

【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了大量短語，例如Of all my teachers，one of the best，pay more attention to，her way of teaching，in her opinion，not only…but also，encourage sb. to think，by ourselves，with her help，how to solve problems，such…that，from inside of our hearts等。同時Of all my teachers, she is one of the best, because she is tall, pretty and bright. / With her help, we’ve learned how to solve problems./ She is such a great person that we all love her from inside of our hearts.等多種復(fù)雜句式結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達流暢，是短文的亮點。