Question

【題目】寫(xiě)作

假如你是Alice, 你想寫(xiě)一封推薦信，推薦你的同學(xué)Daniel獲得今年的新星獎(jiǎng)。推薦

信字?jǐn)?shù)為80詞左右。開(kāi)頭，結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。

Excellent qualities （優(yōu)秀的品質(zhì)）	Good examples （好的事例）
樂(lè)于助人	1．經(jīng)常幫助鄰居修電腦； 2．……（至少一點(diǎn)）
聰明	1．學(xué)東西快，努力學(xué)習(xí)各門(mén)學(xué)科； 2．野營(yíng)時(shí)甚至?xí)�搭建帳篷�?/span>
勇敢	一個(gè)周日的早晨，他像往常一樣，坐在湖邊看書(shū)。突然聽(tīng)到一個(gè)女孩大聲呼救，他跳進(jìn)湖里，把小女孩從水里救了上來(lái)，并送她回家。
……	……（至少兩句）

Dear Sir / Madam,

I would like to recommend Daniel for this year’s Young Star Award.

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All the students in our class think that Daniel should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Alice

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Sir / Madam:

I would like to recommend Daniel for this year’s Young Star Award.

Daniel is a helpful boy. He often helps his neighbors fix computers. He always gives his seat to someone on the bus.He is also clever. He learns things quickly. He works hard on all the subjects. He is even able to put up tents when we go camping.He is brave, too. One Sunday morning, he sat by the lake and read books as usual. Suddenly, he heard a girl calling for help. He jumped into the lake and saved the girl from the water. At last, he sent her home.Daniel is polite and kind to others. He always says “hello” to his teachers. He thinks carefully when he works. He plans everything well. He often takes part in all kinds of activities like collecting clothes and books for the children in need.

All the students in our class think that Daniel should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Alice

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文推薦Daniel 獲得今年的新星獎(jiǎng)，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括表格內(nèi)所有的信息。介紹Daniel的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)和好的事例。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I would like to...，Daniel is ...，he sat by...，He thinks ...，All the students in our class think that....等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我想要推薦Daniel獲得今年的新星獎(jiǎng)，接下來(lái)介紹Daniel的品質(zhì)和所做的好事，最后全班同學(xué)認(rèn)為Daniel應(yīng)得到這個(gè)獎(jiǎng)。此處would like to, give one’s seat to, work hard, put up, hear sb doing sth, call for help, be kind to, take part in, all kinds of, look forward to等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。