Question

【題目】書面表達

作為中學生，我們學習任務繁重。那么我們該不該幫父母做家務呢？針對這個問題，你們班的同學展開了一次討論。下表反映的是討論的結果，請你根據表格內容寫一篇80詞左右的短文并給出你的想法。（文章開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數）

寫作要求：1.語句連貫，詞數80個左右。

2.根據上面的提示，盡可能用上上面所給信息，可適當發(fā)揮。

3.文中不要出現真實的校名和人名。

Opinions	Amount	Reasons
Agree	35%	Help parents relax;develop life skills
Disgree	45%	(be) the parents’ job; (be)so busy study Studying; (be)dirty and boring to do chores
Don’t mind	20%	do chores when they are free

As middle school students, we have too much homework to do every day. Should we help our parents do chores at home? ________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

As middle school students, we have too much homework to do every day. Should we help our parents do chores at home?We have a discussion in our class.Here’s the result.About 30% of the students agree that we should help our parents do chores.They think doing chores can help parents relax.It can also develop their life skills.On the other hand,about 45% of the students think it is their parents’s job.As students,they have no time to do chores because they are busy study.Meanwhile,it’s dirty and boring to do chores.At the same time,about 20% of the students don’t mind doing chores at home.They do chores when they are free.In my opinion,no matter how busy we are,it’s necessary for us to do chores,because we can learn a lot from it.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。所給材料內容比較詳細，層次清楚，貼近學生生活，學生有話可寫。動筆前要認真審題，深入挖掘題材內涵，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。行文時要注意人稱、時態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題，同時注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

寫作亮點： 這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點內容，表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結構組織上使用了簡單句和復合句，文章脈絡清晰，自然流暢。同時，文章還使用了一些常用的句式、短語和過度詞，這為文章增添了文采和層次感。