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6．假設你叫李磊，請你針對這封信的內容，給這位父親寫封回信，談談你的看法．要求：條
例清楚，語義連貫，句式規(guī)范，字跡工整．詞數(shù)80左右．
Dear editor，
I'm sorry to trouble you．I have a daughter．She is 13years old．She likes making telephone calls．As soon as he gets back from school，she picks up the telephone and calls her classmates．She talks and talks，sometimes for 2or 3hours．We can't use it．I tell him not to do it，but she is unhappy．What should I do？
A worried father
Dear sir，
Don't worry．You can have a word with her and tell her what to do．As a student，she must put her heart into the study．Making telephones too much is bad for her study．If she goes on doing it，you can tell it to her teachers．I think they can help you．
You can also find out whom your daughter calls up．You may ask their parents for help．
You may buy a telephone for her．She can make telephone calls with her own telephone，but she must pay for it by herself．．
Yours．

Answer 1

分析 ①Making telephones too much is bad for her study．打電話太多對她的學習不好．句子中Making telephones too much 是動名詞短語做主語，too much太多，修飾不可數(shù)名詞，be bad for對某某有害處．
②If she goes on doing it，you can tell it to her teachers．如果她繼續(xù)這樣做，你可以告訴她的老師．句子中if引導的是一個條件狀語從句；go on doing sth繼續(xù)做某事，后面跟動詞的ing形式；tell sth to sb把某某告訴某某．

解答 Dear Sir，（稱呼）
Don't worry．You can have a word with her and tell her what to do．As a student，she must put her heart into the study．Making telephones too much is bad for her study．If she goes on doing it，you can tell it to her teachers．I think they can help you．（提出解決問題的辦法）
You can also find out whom your daughter calls up．You may ask their parents for help．（提出解決問題的辦法）
You may buy a telephone for her．She can make telephone calls with her own telephone，but she must pay for it by herself．（意見或者建議）
Yours，
Li Lei

點評 解答這種題目時，我們應該仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點． 要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫． 根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達要符合英語習慣． 在平常的學習中注意總結，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，讓文章更出彩．