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17．話題作文："光盤行動"在全國開展以來．每一名中國公民都為此努力著．作為一名中學生．我們應如何從自身做起，勤儉節(jié)約，為構建節(jié)約型社會貢獻一份自己的力量．請圍繞這一話題展開思路談談你的感想．（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)） 
提示詞duty   eat up   take away   necessary
All of us know that"Clear-Up Plates"has been popular throughout China．As a middle School student，it's our duty to do something for it．What should we do？
Saving food is very important．I think when we eat out，it's necessary for us to eat up the food or take it away．It's a bad habit to throw it away．We shouldn't order more food，either．
Besides/What's more，we can do much to save the things in our daily life．Don't throw away haft bottles of water．Turn off the light when we leave the room．Use up the last little piece of the soap and so on．
If everyone can think about our future and save things like these，our life will be better．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
①As a middle school student，②it's our duty to do something for it．作為一名中學生，這是我們的責任，為它做點什么．
①as作為，介詞
②It+be（for sb）+to do sth"（對某人來說）做某事是…的"；it為形式主語，不定式為真正主語．
高分句型二：
①Besides/What's more，we can do much ②to save the things in our daily life．此外，我們可以做很多事情來節(jié)約我們的日常生活中的東西．
①besides/What's more另外，而且；作補充說明
②動詞不定式作目的狀語

解答 All of us know that"Clear-Up Plates"has been popular throughout China．As a middle school student，it's our duty to do something for it．【高分句型一】What should we do？
     Saving food is very important．I think when we eat out，it's necessary for us to eat up the food or take it away．It's a bad habit to throw it away．We shouldn't order more food，either．
     Besides/What's more，we can do much to save the things in our daily life．【高分句型二】Don't throw away haft bottles of water．Turn off the light when we leave the room．Use up the last little piece of the soap and so on．【怎樣做到勤儉節(jié)約】
      If everyone can think about our future and save things like these，our life will be better．

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