Question

【題目】書面表達（20分）

請以 My Hometown 為題，寫一篇短文。要求包括以下要點，可以適當發(fā)揮。但不要逐句翻譯。詞數(shù)70字左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

要點: 1. 小鎮(zhèn)不大，離成都很近，但環(huán)境整潔，樹木林立，河水清澈，空氣清新。

2. 這里有4座大橋和一些現(xiàn)代化的建筑。

3. 有一個購物中心和2個大型超市，有運動場地，人們無論老少，都喜歡在這里活動。

4. 我最喜歡的地方是……,

5. 人們互相認識，非常友好，這里的確是個居住的好方。

My hometown

I’m glad to show you around my hometown.___________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

My hometown

I’m glad to show you around my hometown.My Hometown

My hometown is a beautiful small town. It is very close to Chengdu.

The environment is neat . The river is clear. The air is fresh. There are many green trees and flowers here. We can hear the birds singing and smell the flowers.

There are four bridges and some modern buildings in the town. There is a shopping center and two large supermarkets. There are some sports venues. People, both young and old, like to play here. My favourite place is the shopping center.

People here are helpful and kind. It is a good place to live in. I hope my hometown will be better.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇給材料的作文，讓學生介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)。本文給出了一些要點，并給出了作文的開頭和結(jié)尾。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達出來，并適當發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點：該文語句通順，段落清晰，表達了題目所給出的各個要點。短文用了一些短語和句式，增加了文章的色彩如： We can hear the birds singing and smell the flowers. I hope my hometown will be better.等等。