Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。（25分）

請你以A trip to Wuxi為題寫一篇短文，包括以下要點(diǎn)：

1、上周你和家人一起乘長途汽車去了無錫；

2、你們在那兒呆了兩天；

3、第一天你們看了著名的太湖風(fēng)景，參觀了一些名勝，拍了許多照片；

4、第二天你們?nèi)ベ徫铮�買了一些紀(jì)念品；

5、你們玩得很開心，不會忘了這次有意義的經(jīng)歷。

Answer 1

【答案】

A trip to Wuxi

Wuxi is a beautiful city.

Last week, my family and I took a bus to Wuxi. We stayed there for two days. On the first day we saw the famous Taihu Lake and visited some places of interest. We also took a lot of photos. On the second day we went shopping and bought some souvenirs. We played very happily. We won’t forget the meaningful experience.

【解析】

試題分析：本次作文為話題類作文，要求以A trip to Wuxi為題寫一篇短文。寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)列出，要求明確，故要完成寫作任務(wù)，務(wù)必把各要點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本篇范文成功地完成了寫作任務(wù)，要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。本文應(yīng)用了很多短語使得文章很生動，例如Last week, my family and I took a bus to Wuxi. We stayed there for two days. On the first day we saw the famous Taihu Lake and visited some places of interest.一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)、一般過去時態(tài)、一般將來時態(tài)的應(yīng)用更使得短文表述更準(zhǔn)確Wuxi is a beautiful city. Last week, my family and I took a bus to Wuxi. We won’t forget the meaningful experience.總之，該文是一篇不錯的短文。