Question

【題目】我們的外籍同學(xué)Linda寫(xiě)信給國(guó)內(nèi)的朋友Mike，談她在中國(guó)學(xué)校的生活。

學(xué)習(xí)	作息時(shí)間：8:00—17:15。有許多的課程。擅長(zhǎng)漢語(yǔ)，最喜歡畫(huà)畫(huà)。
運(yùn)動(dòng)與活動(dòng)	經(jīng)常打籃球和游泳，每周都要參加舞蹈俱樂(lè)部。
飲食	在學(xué)校吃午餐，飲食健康，有米飯、蔬菜、魚(yú)類和水果，口味很好。
節(jié)假日	與中國(guó)同學(xué)一起過(guò)年。（the Chinese New Year）
感受	…

要求：

1. 所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括提供的所有信息，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2. 文章不少于80詞，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3. 語(yǔ)氣通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，條理清楚，字跡工整。

4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名及地點(diǎn)名。

Dear Mike,

I am in this new school for half a year. I would like to tell you something about my life here.

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Please write to me soon.

Yours,

Linda

Answer 1

【答案】Possible writing:

Dear Mike,

I am in this new school for half a year. I would like to tell you something about my life here.

My school starts at 8:30 a.m. and is over at 5:15 p.m.. I have many lessons. I am good at Chinese. and I like drawing best. I often play basketball after school and go to the Dancing Club every week. I have lunch at school. The food is healthy. I have rice, vegetables, fish and fruit. They taste very nice. I spend the Chinese New Year with my Chinese classmates. Life is interesting here. You will also like it if you come. Please write to me soon.

Yours,

Linda

【解析】

本文屬于材料作文，要表達(dá)Linda在中國(guó)學(xué)校的生活。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如over, like...best, often, healthy以及interesting。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。