Question

【題目】書面表

暑假即將來臨，你們學(xué)校社團(tuán)正在招募暑期環(huán)保愛心志愿者，李明準(zhǔn)備報(bào)名參加。請(qǐng)你幫他寫一封申請(qǐng)函，要點(diǎn)如下：

姓名	李明
個(gè)性	非常有條理，總是使東西井然有序 樂于助人，從不介意為班級(jí)做額外的工作
環(huán)保生活	為了節(jié)約用水，刷牙時(shí)總是關(guān)掉水龍頭 購(gòu)物時(shí)總是自帶購(gòu)物袋而不使用塑料袋 --------(幫他再寫一點(diǎn)環(huán)保措施)
愛心活動(dòng)	曾捐書給貧困地區(qū)的孩子們 上學(xué)期為一位患心臟病的孩子舉行了慈善義演并為她的手術(shù)募集到足夠的資金

1. 短文必須包括以上所有要點(diǎn), 并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2. 詞數(shù)100 左右，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3. 參考詞匯：有條理的organized 額外的extra 塑料plastic 疾病disease

捐獻(xiàn)donate 慈善charity 手術(shù)operation (n)

Dear principle

I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of the society of our school.

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I think I have the qualities to be a volunteer. I will be very happy if I can be a member of our society.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear principle

I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of the society of our school.

Let me introduce myself first. I’m well organized and always keep my things in order. I’m helpful too. I never mind doing extra work for my class. As a result, I’m popular in my class.

I think I have developed a green lifestyle in my daily life. In order to save water, I always turn off the tap when I brush my teeth. And I also turn off the power when the TV or computer is not in use so that I can save power. I always take my own bags instead of plastic bags when shopping.

I used to donate books to children in poor areas. Last term I held a charity show for a child with a heart disease and raised enough money for his operation.

I think I have the qualities to be a volunteer. I will be very happy if I can be a member of our society.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開頭和結(jié)尾。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文多次使用固定句型如In order to，instead of，used to，so that等等，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。