Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

6月5日是世界環(huán)境保護(hù)日，你校組織以“ Being a volunteer of going green”為題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。假如李明參加比賽，請(qǐng)你以李明的名義寫一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿推薦自己，內(nèi)容如下：

品質(zhì)	助人為樂(lè)，善良，有禮貌
愛(ài)好	旅游，閱讀，上網(wǎng)
事跡	組織慈善義演，為WWF籌集資金 ……
感悟	地球是我們唯一的家園 保護(hù)環(huán)境，人人有責(zé)
措施	……(至少兩點(diǎn))

要求：1. 要點(diǎn)完整，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮， 使句子通順、連貫。

2. 正確使用時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)法正確，書寫整潔。

3. 90詞左右，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Being a volunteer of going green

Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I’m glad to make a speech here._____________________________________________________________________________

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If I can be a volunteer, ___________________________________________________________

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Thank you for listening!

Answer 1

【答案】

Being a volunteer of going green

Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of going green. I’m glad to make a speech here.

I’m kind to others. I’m willing to help others any time. I know the importance of good manners. In my free time, I like travelling, reading and surfing on the Internet. I have ever organized a charity show to raise money for WWF. And I often plant trees on 5 June, World Environment Day every year.

Earth is our only home. I think it’s our duty for everyone to protect the environment. If we work together, we can make the world a better place.

If I can be a volunteer, I can do many things for our environment. I can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when we brush our teeth. I can separate waste into different groups so that it can be recycled. I must try my best to make a big difference to the Earth.

Thank you for listening!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇利用信息提示寫作的話題作文。要求根據(jù)信息提示，以“Being a volunteer of going green”為話題，寫一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿。首先，要明確要點(diǎn)，把握句子結(jié)構(gòu)。其次，要層次分明，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要逐字翻譯，上下要有連貫性。時(shí)態(tài)的選擇主要應(yīng)該是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一人稱。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：文章能按照寫作要求，從五個(gè)方面進(jìn)行寫作，要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。用了大量的復(fù)合句I think it’s our duty for everyone to protect the environment. If we work together, we can make the world a better place.這些復(fù)合句的使用，豐富了文章的內(nèi)容，為文章增色不少。是一篇上等的佳作。