Question

16．假如你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生會主席王東，為了配合環(huán)保教育主題活動，請根據(jù)下面所給提示，用英語寫一封倡議書，內(nèi)容包括：
1．環(huán)保措施和美化城市的措施（各2條）；
2．你的希望．
注意：
1．注意文章的整體連貫；
2．文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3.80詞左右．
Dear friends，
In order to make the environment more beautiful，we shoulddo what we can
to protect it．First，we should plant more trees and flowers to make our city more beautiful．Also，always remember not to throw rubbish or pour waste water everywhere．As we all know，water is becoming less and less．So it's quite necessary to save water．For example，turn the tap off after washing．Last，but not the least，we'd better ride a bike or walk when going out instead of driving a car．
In my opinion，if everyone tries his best to protect the envir onment，our city will become nicer and cleaner!
Thank you!
Wang Dong．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇倡議書，話題是"環(huán)保教育"，作為學(xué)生會主席提出倡議并要求大家做到，所以要用第一人稱，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．倡議的內(nèi)容要包括環(huán)保措施和美化城市的措施，并且敘述在此倡議下自己對環(huán)保的希望是什么．提出的兩項措施內(nèi)容不能少于兩條，提出倡議常用到句型：We should…/We shouldn't…

解答 Dear friends，
In order to make the environment more beautiful，we should do what we can
to protect it．First，we should plant more trees and flowers to make our city more beautiful．Also，always remember not to throw rubbish or pour waste water everywhere．As we all know，water is becoming less and less．So it's quite necessary to save water．For example，turn the tap off after washing．Last，but not the least，we'd better ride a bike or walk when going out instead of driving a car．
     In my opinion，if everyone tries his best to protect the envir onment，our city will become nicer and cleaner!
      Thank you．
                                                       Wang Dong

點評 完成書面表達要語言流暢，語句通順，合乎邏輯，使用簡單的連接成分，使內(nèi)容更有層次性．