Question

16．上周末你們班的學(xué)生去南山（South Hill）進(jìn)行了一次野營(yíng)活動(dòng)，根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)提示，以
A Happy Weekend為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于80詞的短文．
1南山距學(xué)校大約10公里，學(xué)生騎車大約一小時(shí)．
2活動(dòng)：林中散步、湖邊垂釣、生火做飯、湖上泛舟、篝火（campfire）歌舞
3學(xué)生們看DIY的說(shuō)明，自己搭帳篷（tent）．
4師生們玩得盡興；學(xué)生們都很期待下次班級(jí)旅行．
A Happy Weekend
                                                                          

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
高分句型一：
Last weekend the students in our class went to the South Hill for a picnic．上周末你們班的學(xué)生去南山進(jìn)行了一次野營(yíng)活動(dòng)．last weekend意思是"上周"是時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，go to意思是"去哪里"
高分句型二：
We had many activities there，including waling in the woods，fishing near the lake，cooking，rowing in the lake，and campfire dancing．我們?cè)诹种猩⒉�、湖邊垂釣、生火做飯、湖上泛舟、篝火、歌舞．including 是介詞，意思是"包括"

解答 A Happy Weekend
Last weekend the students in our class went to the South Hill for a picnic．【高分句型一】（介紹了時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，人物，事件）The South Hill is ten kilometers away from our school，and it took us about an hour to get there by bike．We had many activities there，including waling in the woods，fishing near the lake，cooking，rowing in the lake，and campfire dancing．【高分句型二】We put up tents according to the DIY book．We had a lot of fun and really enjoyed ourselves．（介紹了主要的活動(dòng)項(xiàng)目）We hope to have another chance that we can have a school trip．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 首席要仔細(xì)審題，注意時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，人物，活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要全面不能有漏落，時(shí)態(tài)主要使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，結(jié)合部分一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，要注意時(shí)態(tài)的變換．