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2．據(jù)報道，由于缺乏鍛煉，中學生的身體素質(zhì)有所下降，這一情況已經(jīng)引起社會的關注和教育部門的高度重視，近年來，我市繼續(xù)開展初中畢業(yè)生升學體育考試工作，旨在切實貫徹黨的教育方針，全面提高學生身體素質(zhì)，同學們剛剛參加過初中畢業(yè)生升學體育考試，你有何感想？請你根據(jù)下面的提示和要求，寫一篇90詞左右的英語短文．
提示：1．鍛煉身體的好處：strong，healthy，energetic…
2．鍛煉身體的方式：ball games，running，swimming…favorite sport；
3．請你談談對體育鍛煉的看法和建議．
要求：1．內(nèi)容必須包括以上要點，可適當發(fā)揮；
2．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3．語句通順，意思連貫，調(diào)理清楚，字跡工整．
Exercise one hour a day，keep illness away!As we know，taking sports will keep one healthy．It can help us keep strong．The more the young students exercise，the more energetic they will be．As a middle school student，I am busy with study．I have little time to take exercise，but I still do sports as often as I can．I play ball games，running，swimming and so on．My favorite sport is playing basketball．I often watch basketball matches．What's more，I think outdoor activities are sports，too．I also take an active part in other kinds of activities．At weekend I often go for a picnic with my family．I also like climbing mountains，flying kites，boating and so on．I enjoy colorful sports．Let's take sports and keep ourselves healthy before it is too late．．

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分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談談對體育鍛煉的看法和建議．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．鍛煉身體的好處：
2．鍛煉身體的方式：
3．請你談談對體育鍛煉的看法和建議．
常用到的重點短語：
keep healthy 保持健康
be busy with 忙于…
as…as sb can 盡可能的…
what's more 再者
take part in 參加
【高分句型】
1．The more the young students exercise，the more energetic they will be．
"the more…，the more…"句型為"the+形容詞或副詞比較級，the+比較級"結(jié)構(gòu)，常表示"越…，就越…"，是一個復合句，其中前面的句子是狀語從句，后面的句子是主句．
2．I have little time ①to take exercise，②but I still do sports ③as often as I can．
①動詞不定式做后置定語，修飾time．
②but表轉(zhuǎn)折
③as…as sb can 盡可能的…

解答 Exercise one hour a day，keep illness away!As we know，taking sports will keep one healthy．It can help us keep strong．The more the young students exercise，the more energetic they will be．【高分句型】（鍛煉身體的好處）As a middle school student，I am busy with study．I have little time to take exercise，but I still do sports as often as I can．【高分句型】I play ball games，running，swimming and so on．My favorite sport is playing basketball．I often watch basketball matches．What's more，I think outdoor activities are sports，too．I also take an active part in other kinds of activities．At weekend I often go for a picnic with my family．I also like climbing mountains，flying kites，boating and so on．I enjoy colorful sports．（鍛煉身體的方式及看法）Let's take sports and keep ourselves healthy before it is too late．（建議）

點評 這是一篇提綱作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，應在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容，避免使用無把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫句子要符合英語的表達習慣