Question

17．每年5月31日是世界無煙日，請(qǐng)結(jié)合下面所給要點(diǎn)，以"Saying No to Smoking"為題，談?wù)勎鼰煹奈：Γ?br />要點(diǎn)：1．吸煙有害健康，能導(dǎo)致咳嗽、肺癌等疾�。�
2．吸煙不但浪費(fèi)錢還污染環(huán)境；
3．二手煙同樣有害；
4．你的態(tài)度：面對(duì)別人吸煙怎么辦？
參考詞匯：
lung cancer肺癌；secondhand smoke二手煙； cause引起；waste浪費(fèi)；harm有害；pollute污染
Saying No to Smoking
Smoking is a big problem．Even though cigarettes harm our bodies and waste a lot of money，smokers still enjoy smoking．
Smoking is bad for your health．First of all，if people smoke too much，they will get lung cancer．Second，smokingpollutes the environment．A bad environment can influence our daily lives．So we should say no to smoking．
I hate smoking．But my father is a heavy smoker．He used to smoke five cigarettes a day，and he even made himself sick．Now，with the help of my mother，he has given up smoking．Fortunately，he is now healthierthan before．
All in all，I want to tell every smoker，we should say no to smoking．If we do，the world will bemore beautiful!．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是以"Saying No to Smoking"為題，談?wù)勎鼰煹奈：Γ畷r(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．吸煙有害健康，能導(dǎo)致咳嗽、肺癌等疾�。�
2．吸煙不但浪費(fèi)錢還污染環(huán)境；
3．二手煙同樣有害；
4．你的態(tài)度：面對(duì)別人吸煙怎么辦？
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
even though 即使
be bad for 對(duì)…不利
do harm to 對(duì)…有害
keep away from 遠(yuǎn)離
try to do sth 盡力做某事

【高分句型】
1．①Even though cigarettes harm our bodies and waste a lot of money，smokers still ②enjoy smoking．
①even though 即使，引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句．
②enjoy doing sth 喜歡做某事
2．If someone offers a cigarette，we should refuse it．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞should，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)代替一般將來時(shí)．

解答 Smoking is a big problem．Even though cigarettes harm our bodies and waste a lot of money，smokers still enjoy smoking．【高分句型】
    Smoking is bad for your health．First of all，if people smoke too much，they will get lung cancer．（吸煙有害健康，能導(dǎo)致咳嗽、肺癌等疾病）Second，smoking pollutes the environment．A bad environment can influence our daily lives．So we should say no to smoking．（吸煙不但浪費(fèi)錢還污染環(huán)境）
    Secondhand smoke does harm to us as well．（二手煙同樣有害）So we must do something to keep away from smoking．If someone offers a cigarette，we should refuse it．【高分句型】And if anyone smokes nearby，we should try to stop it．From now on，every of us should follow the law and say no to smoking．（面對(duì)別人吸煙怎么辦）
  All in all，I want to tell every smoker，we should say no to smoking．If we do，the world will be more beautiful!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文是一項(xiàng)能夠充分考查學(xué)生語言綜合運(yùn)用能力的題型．主要考查學(xué)生運(yùn)用已學(xué)的語言基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)和已掌握的英語寫作技能準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)客觀事實(shí)，闡述個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，進(jìn)行思想交流的書面表達(dá)能力．為了提高書面表達(dá)水平，平時(shí)應(yīng)加強(qiáng)閱讀，應(yīng)背誦一些句型、段落、甚至短文．只要讀得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下筆成文．此外，還要了解英文寫作方面的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，掌握常用文體的寫作方法．其實(shí)，用英文寫信，記日記等都是學(xué)生力所能及且行之有效的練習(xí)寫作的好方法．