Question

17．根據(jù)要求完成大作文，詞數(shù)：80詞左右．
根據(jù)遼寧省政府減輕中小學(xué)生課業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)的要求，各市教育局已經(jīng)調(diào)整了學(xué)生上下學(xué)的時間，這使學(xué)生們的生活發(fā)生了一系列變化．請根據(jù)下列表格中的提示，用英語寫一篇文章．

	在校時間	作業(yè)時限	假日安排	課外活動
過 去	…	…	周末和節(jié)假日補(bǔ)課	少而乏味
現(xiàn) 在	不超過7個半小時	不超過1個半小時	不補(bǔ)課，做自己喜歡做的事．	豐富多彩，如：郊游，文體活動，做家務(wù)等．
你的看法	…

要求：（1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名．
（2）文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
（3）內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
（4）參考詞匯：have extra classes，after-school activities，few and boring，colorful．
Great changes have taken place since the government of Liaoning did something to reduce the students'studying pressure．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一篇文章介紹學(xué)生們生活的變化．本題以表格形式給出了主要寫作內(nèi)容，寫作中注意將學(xué)生們過去和現(xiàn)在的生活介紹清楚，發(fā)表自己的看法．結(jié)合材料可知本文涉及一般過去時，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題，人稱用第三人稱．內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．

解答 Great changes have taken place since the government of Liaoning did something to reduce the students'studying pressure． In the past，the students often studied at school for over 10 hours．Then they also did their homework at home for more than two house．They spent their weekends or holiday having extra classes．So students'studying lives were very boring and they had few time to do other things but studying．But now the students only take less than hours to study at school．They only spend less than one and half an hour finishing their homework．They can do things what they like to do．Their after-school activities are very colorful．They can have a trip，play sports or so some housework．I think if we can keep relaxed，we can study better．

點(diǎn)評 做英語書面表達(dá)時，只要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句．最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤．此書面表達(dá)重在兩種時態(tài)的分別使用和表達(dá)．