Question

【題目】書面表達

學校正在召開以“憶過去，談現(xiàn)在，想未來”為題的英語演講比賽。假設(shè)你是李雷請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫一份約80字演講稿。

	Some years ago	These days	In the future
Personality	quiet	more outgoing	active
Hobby or plan	1. stay at home 2. read	1. TV shows(talk Shows,learn from them) 2.do sports often	1……. 2……

要求：演講稿必須包括表格所提供的信息，關(guān)于未來的“Hobby or plan”至少寫2條

Answer 1

【答案】

I have changed a lot over the years. In the past, I used to be quiet. I always stayed at home and read. But now,

I am more outgoing. I like watching TV. I like talk shows best because I think I can learn a lot from them. I often do sports after class. I think I will be active in the future. I’ll practice playing basketball harder and harder. I hope I can become a basketball player when I grow up. Becoming a player is a hard job. But I believe I can do.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達出來，并適當發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文中要用到一般過去時、一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時態(tài)，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點：這篇短文使用了一些固定短語如a lot，used to，learn a lot from，harder and harder等等，為文章增色不少。學習中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。