Question

現(xiàn)在學(xué)生上網(wǎng)（get on-line）成風(fēng)，下周班會，老師將談?wù)撚嘘P(guān)問題。假設(shè)你是老師，請根據(jù)下面提供的內(nèi)容寫一篇80詞左右的講話稿，要點(diǎn)必須齊全。
好處：1.幫助學(xué)習(xí)；2.獲得更多信息，了解世界；3.玩游戲，使人放松并更聰明。
壞處：1.上網(wǎng)時間長，有害健康；2.網(wǎng)上交友，學(xué)習(xí)時間少，學(xué)習(xí)越來越差。
建議：1.在校學(xué)習(xí)時，不上網(wǎng)；2.周末和假期可上網(wǎng)，但時間不要太長，每天一、兩個小時。
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Answer 1

Good afternoon, class. Today let’s talk about getting online. Many students like getting online very much. They can learn how to use the modern machine-computer. They can get more information. It can make them clever to play different kinds of games. But some students spend too much time in playing games. Some even make friends online. They write too many letters to each other. It takes them too much time. So they do worse and worse in their lessons. I think they mustn’t get online when they are studying at school. They can do it in summer or winter holidays.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料的討論稿。討論稿是以議論為主要表達(dá)方式并對客觀事理進(jìn)行分析評論，表達(dá)作者的見解和主張的一種文體。討論稿在語言運(yùn)用上突出的特點(diǎn)是說理性。由于討論稿是直接表達(dá)作者的看法和主張的，它在寫法上要舉出正確而典型的事例，證明這些看法和主張是正確的。在做題時允許有記敘和描述，但這些記敘和描述都只能是說理的輔助手段，不能喧賓奪主。討論稿要有討論的中心論點(diǎn)，
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文中心明確，語言準(zhǔn)確，沒有語言錯誤。