Question

假如你是王平（Wang Ping），初中即將畢業(yè)，給安德森（Anderson）發(fā)了份電子郵件，告訴他你將如何度過這個暑假。（90詞左右，包括所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮）
要點：1、跟隨父母一起做的一件事，如出去旅游、拜訪親友等等；
2、自己的日常生活安排情況，如做家務、堅持鍛煉、讀書、適當看電視、完成作業(yè)等；
3、計劃做一件對你將來的學習、生活有幫助的事。如學鋼琴、參加夏令營等活動；
Dear Anderson，                                                                    
How is everything going? I am very happy to tell you                                 
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
Your Sincerely,
Wang Ping

Answer 1

Dear Anderson，                                                                    
How is everything going? I am very happy to tell you about my summer holiday. I am leaving from my school in July. I will have a long Summer holiday. I will go to Beijing with my parents because my grandparents live there. There are lots of beautiful places. We want to visit them on the vacation. I usually do the chores. In the moring, I will go for a walk in the park. Then read some famous books, do my homework, watch TV. I will plan to learn to play the piano,or I will take part in a Summer Camp because these activities can help me to learn more. I think we can chat on the Internet. You can help me with my English and I can tell you about my story. Do you agree? I am looking forward to hearing from you!
Your Sincerely,
Wang Ping

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中正確使用動詞的適當形式，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文采用樂觀者的角度與焦慮者的觀點進行對比，恰當好處運用了形容詞的比較級，從而更清晰的表達出中心思想。最后作者提出 自己的想法，使文章內函得到升華，那就是共同努力創(chuàng)建美好家園。