Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

在我們的成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中，總有許多人給我們幫助和鼓勵(lì)。回顧其中的許多點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴滴，久久不能忘記。請(qǐng)你用英文給他/她寫一封信，和他（她）說(shuō)說(shuō)感激的心里話。要點(diǎn)提示：1. 短文應(yīng)包括圖中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫。

2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名

3.詞數(shù) 80字左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)）

Dear Mr./Mrs.Wang,

I am leaving junior middle school and I have so many words from my heart to say. I am just writing ________________________________________________________________________________________

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yours

LiLei

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr./Mrs.Wang,

I am leaving junior middle school and I have so many words from my heart to say.

Since you became my English teacher three years ago, you’ve always been working hard. I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are. You’re strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly. All my classmates agree we get on well with each other for these years. I still remember when I failed in an exam, you encouraged me to keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you told me to be brave.

Because of your help, many students, including me, are more and more interested in English and make much progress, too. You have given me so much.

Yours,

LiLei

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者主要寫三年的校園生活的回憶，全文所用時(shí)態(tài)有一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)、一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，還有現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如from my heart ，be strict with,take care of ,get on well with ,each other等短語(yǔ)，文中還用到了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句 when I failed in an exam, When I had trouble in life,Since you became my English teacher three years ago；賓語(yǔ)從句 I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are.， All my classmates agree we get on well with each other for these years；感嘆句 how interesting your lessons are，how friendly you are.多種時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用自如，例如現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時(shí)you’ve always been working hard，一般將來(lái)時(shí)I won't forget，一般過(guò)去時(shí)when I failed in an exam.文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。