Question

【題目】學(xué)校正在開展以“A greener city, a better life”為題的英語征文活動。請根據(jù)所給提示，用英語寫一篇短文。

注意事項：

1. 詞數(shù)：90 詞左右（文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；

2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等信息；

3. 文章必須包含所提供的主要信息，并作適當發(fā)揮。

A greener city, a better life

As a middle school student in Yancheng, we should create a greener city to __________________

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Answer 1

【答案】A greener city, a better life

As a middle school student in Yancheng, we should create a greener city to live a better life.

However, it’s a pity that we often see some people drop litter everywhere. Some forget to turn off the lights when leaving a room.

To create a greener city, ride or walk to school instead of taking a car. Also, we can plant more trees and flowers. Besides, it’s a good idea to separate the rubbish into different groups so that things like bottles and cans can be recycled.

In all, if everyone does his part, we can live a better life in a greener city.

【解析】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如as a middle school student、live a better life、see sb. do sth.、forget to do、turn off、walk to school、instead of、separate into、so that、in all等。而固定句型“it’s a good idea to separate the rubbish into different groups so that things like bottles and cans can be recycled.”和“it’s a pity that we often see some people drop litter everywhere./ Some forget to turn off the lights when leaving a room./ if everyone does his part, we can live a better life in a greener city.”等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。