Question

【題目】Writing （作文）

Write at least 60 words on the topic “ ， a place I have visited”(以“ ， 我參觀的一個地方”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。)

暑假即將來臨，我們不少學(xué)生準(zhǔn)備出去游學(xué)、參觀。你能否能把自己參觀過的一個地方（village/town/beach/museum/city/country...）推薦給你的同學(xué)？請說明推薦理由并提出一些建議。

Answer 1

【答案】例文

The Great Wall, a place I have visited

I have been to the Great Wall last summer holiday. I went there by bus with my parents. The bus was very fast, but I still felt it slow. When we got there, it was 12 o’clock. When we got the foot of BaDaling Mountain, I couldn't help to climbing.

"The Great Wall was the longest wall in the world, and we are very proud of it..." After listening to the guide, I climbed and climbed, when I felt tired, I always thought about the people who made the Great wall, and then I felt energetic.My hard working was paid off in the end! Just like a saying goes "The man who hasn’t been to the Great Wall is not a real man!" I was excited and shouted that "I am a true man!"

【解析】

1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，但寫作時注意題目要求，要推薦給朋友并給出自己的建議。