Question

【題目】書面表達。

請根據(jù)表格中所給的提示，寫一篇短文介紹你的網(wǎng)友Mike。

要求：1) 字數(shù)在80左右，不得出現(xiàn)真實校名和姓名。

2）文中須包括所有提示的內容，每個方面都可適當加以想象發(fā)揮。

基本信息	14歲，高個子，戴眼鏡，在七年級（3）班 尖子生，最喜歡的學科是……
生活和飲食	每天6點半起床，步行上學…… 常吃 / 從不吃 / 很少吃…… 每周鍛煉…… （給出合理建議）
愛好	擅長……；是……的一員
夢想	成為一名……

My online friend

I have an online friend. His name is Mike.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My online friend

I have an online friend. His name is Mike. He is 14 years old. He is tall with a pair of glasses.He is studying in Class3 Grade7. He is a top student. His favorite subject is English, because he thinks it is interesting. He gets up at 6:30, and he goes to school on foot. He often eats fruits and he never eats hamburgers. He seldom eats ice-cream. He does exercise twice a week. I think he should exercise every day. He is good at drawing, and he is in the school art club. He wants to be an artist. I hope his dream can come true.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的網(wǎng)友Mike。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：His name is…，He is....， because he thinks ...，I think…，I hope...等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，注意在文后要祝他夢想成真

寫作亮點：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的網(wǎng)友的名字，接下來介紹他的個人信息：年齡、長相、生活、飲食、擅長和夢想，最后希望他夢想成真。此處get up, go to school, on foot, twice a week, be good at, be in, want to do sth, come true等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。