Question

11．我市正在創(chuàng)建"學(xué)習(xí)型城市"，現(xiàn)舉辦專(zhuān)題英語(yǔ)征文比賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所提供的信息，以終身學(xué)習(xí)"Lifelong Learning"為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文．

意義	人們上學(xué)、參加考試，但學(xué)習(xí)不只在學(xué)校； 學(xué)校畢業(yè)，不是學(xué)習(xí)的終止．
途徑	去博物館、閱讀書(shū)籍、體育鍛煉、外出旅行
益處	1．…2．…

要求：1．詞數(shù)100左右，短文的開(kāi)頭不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2．短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順．
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息．
Lifelong Learning
When you finish high school or university，is learning done？The answer is"no"．In many countries，people continue learning all their lives．                                                     

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
And learning doesn't stop when you finish high school or university學(xué)習(xí)不會(huì)在你畢業(yè)的時(shí)候就停止．
when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．當(dāng)…時(shí)候．
【高分句型二】
Every day，you can improve yourself by learning something new每天，你可以通過(guò)學(xué)習(xí)新的東西去提高自己．
by doing sth 通過(guò)某種方式．

解答 Lifelong Learning
When you finish high school or university，is learning done？The answer is"no"．In many countries，people continue learning all their lives．Why is lifelong learning important？You go to school and learn．You study．You take tests．But learning doesn't only happen in school．And learning doesn't stop when you finish high school or university．【高分句型一】You are learning all the time．（人們上學(xué)、參加考試，但學(xué)習(xí)不只在學(xué)校；學(xué)校畢業(yè)，不是學(xué)習(xí)的終止．）For example，learning can happen when you go to a museum．It can also happen when you read a book．You learn when you play a sport or when you take a trip．（去博物館、閱讀書(shū)籍、體育鍛煉、外出旅行）Learning is life！We never stop learning．Every day，you can improve yourself by learning something new．【高分句型二】（益處）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫(xiě)作時(shí)，除了注意短文的內(nèi)容之外，還需要注意表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，多使用一些自己平時(shí)積累的好的短語(yǔ)和句型，使短文更加流暢、連貫．