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19．4月2日下午，滬蓉高速江蘇境內發(fā)生連環(huán)車禍，導致兩人死亡、多人受傷． 學校English Corner聽說這一消息后，意識到隨著經濟的發(fā)展，家庭擁有汽車的數量在擴大，道路交通安全日益重要，決定開展題為"Tips for Traffic Safety"的英語征文活動．
現請你寫一篇英語征文給學校English Corner，在文中分析交通事故的常見原因及并給出合理建議．

原因	客觀原因	天氣原因；路況；能見度…
	主觀原因	酒駕；違反交通規(guī)則；疲勞駕駛…
建議	1．旅行前檢查車況； 2．開車時注意路況； 3．…

要    求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；
2）必須包括表格中所有的相關信息，并適當發(fā)揮；
3）詞數：100詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）；
4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等．
Tips for Traffic Safety
As we all know，too many traffic accidents have taken place on the road．
 Maybe                                                           

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Sometimes people themselves do something wrong that causes these accidents有時候人自己也犯些錯引起這些事故．
that引導的定語從句，修飾something，that作為從句的主語．
【高分句型二】
We prefer driving more slowly and safely to doing a little faster我們寧愿開的慢點安全點也不要開快．
prefer doing to doing 寧愿做某事不愿做某事

解答 Tips for Traffic Safety
As we all know，too many traffic accidents have taken place on the road．
Maybe there are many reasons causes these accidents such as，the bad weather and road conditions，the poor eyesight，some unexpected trouble and so on．（天氣原因；路況；能見度…）
Sometimes people themselves do something wrong that causes these accidents．【高分句型一】Some drive after drinking，some break the traffic rules freely，some are still driving when they are very tired．Others drive in anger．（酒駕；違反交通規(guī)則；疲勞駕駛…）
All above are very dangerous．Before driving you'd better check our car carefully．While driving it's necessary to pay attention to the road conditions．We prefer driving more slowly and safely to doing a little faster．【高分句型二】（建議：1．旅行前檢查車況；2．開車時注意路況；開慢點）
After all safety gives us the most happiness．

點評 要求學生平時積累好句式，在具體的寫作中，只要句式正確，才適當增加具體的單詞，這樣才能以不變應萬變．