Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

Daniel是陽光中學(xué)9年級1班的學(xué)生, 你想推薦他成為班長。請根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，用英語寫一篇介紹Daniel的短文。

1．他很聰明，常能想出很多好點(diǎn)子；

2. 耐心, 做事有條理，從不忘記他必須做的事；

3．他喜歡紅色，因?yàn)榧t色可以是他更容易做決定。當(dāng)他遇到困難時(shí)，她就會(huì)穿紅色；

4．他樂于助人，經(jīng)常幫助我們解決一些數(shù)學(xué)難題；

5． 我相信……

注意：1. 短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順，意思連貫；

2．第5點(diǎn)用1-2句話展開合理想象，做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。詞數(shù)90詞左右。

Daniel is a Class 1, Grade 9 student in Sunshine Secondary School._______________

Answer 1

【答案】

Daniel is a Class 1, Grade 9 student in Sunshine Secondary School. As everybody knows, Daniel is the best student in our class and I think he is the most suitable candidate for the monitor.

Firstly, he is highly intelligent and hard working. He does extremely well in his lessons and always get A’s in all his subjects. Furthermore, he is never too proud of his achievements.

Secondly, he is warm-hearted and always ready to help others. For example, last May our classmates Zhang Ming broke his legs in a basketball match and he had to stay in bed for a month. It was Daniel that offered to help him with lessons every day. As a result, Zhang Ming was able to catch up with others in studies.

Thirdly, Daniel takes an active part in all kinds of social activities, such as donating money to the children in the poor areas, helping the disabled and the old do whatever they need, and so on..

Generally speaking, Daniel is qualified to be our monitor.

【解析】

試題分析：本次寫作任務(wù)是根據(jù)提示和要求推薦丹尼爾做班長。具體到本次寫作，考生要先審清題目要求，確定好作文人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、寫作要點(diǎn)、段落等基本內(nèi)容。明確作文的基本內(nèi)容后，就是選用準(zhǔn)確的詞匯和恰當(dāng)?shù)木渥觼肀磉_(dá)。其中要特別注意最后一點(diǎn)，我們需要用自己的話來講這一條補(bǔ)充完整，這就需要我們發(fā)揮自己的想象力，補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容要符合上下文的文意。寫作時(shí)，要適當(dāng)使用一些句型、句式，使文章表達(dá)流暢。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如do well in，F(xiàn)or example，As a result，catch up with, takes an active part in，and so on，generally speaking，be qualified to；還運(yùn)用句型It was Li Hua that offered to help him with lessons every day.這句運(yùn)用強(qiáng)調(diào)句；Li Hua takes an active part in all kinds of social activities, such as donating money to the children in the poor areas, helping the disabled and the old do whatever they need, and so on.這句運(yùn)用了非謂語動(dòng)詞。并注意了句子的銜接如：Furthermore，F(xiàn)irstly，Secondly，Thirdly等等。