Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

請你寫一篇作文，描寫你的家鄉(xiāng)近幾年來的變化。從馬路、建筑物、商店、旅游等方面進(jìn)行描述。（不少于80詞）

1．過去，我的家鄉(xiāng)是個貧窮的小鎮(zhèn)，但是河水清澈，空氣清新。人們住在低矮的屋子里。人們常常步行或騎自行車去鎮(zhèn)里。

2．在過去的幾年中，我的家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生了很大變化，多數(shù)答搬時(shí)了公寓。馬路變寬了，超市也多了。

3．人們可以坐公共汽車或打的去鎮(zhèn)里。但是空氣不如以前新鮮了，樹也沒以前多了。

4．人們意識到保護(hù)環(huán)境是很重要的。

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Answer 1

【答案】

In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be old and small. The traffic used to be not convenient. They used to walk to the town, but the mountains were greener, water much cleaner. They enjoyed a clearer sky .Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to town. But the air is not as fresh as before, and there are fewer trees. Now we all know protecting the environment is very important. I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future..

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求介紹家鄉(xiāng)的變化。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可能會用到過去時(shí)態(tài)（used to do 過去常常）和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。根據(jù)提綱要求進(jìn)行描述就可以了。因此，動筆前要認(rèn)真審題，羅列要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

亮點(diǎn)說明: 這篇短文要點(diǎn)敘述全，幾乎沒有語言錯誤，句式變化靈活。語言豐富。同時(shí)使用一些固定句式和短語，如:used to, Great changes have taken place, in the past,as ---as等，這為文章增色不少。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié), 牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。