Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

以下是我和我的朋友Jane和Michael 過去和現(xiàn)在的業(yè)余愛好。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫一篇以“Our hobbies”為題的短文，描述每個(gè)人過去和現(xiàn)在的愛好，以及喜愛的原因。80詞左右。

Names	In the past	Now	Reasons
I	Watch TV	Run	Build me up，keep my lungs and heart healthy
Michael	Listen to music	Swim	Be good for heart，relax
Jane	Go shopping	Collect stamps	Great fun

Our hobbies

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Answer 1

【答案】

Our hobbies

I liked watching TV in the past, but now I like running. I think running can build me up，keep my lungs and heart healthy. I have two good friends. One is Michael. He liked listening to music in the past. But now his hobby is to swim. He thinks it’s good for his heart, at the same time he can relax himself through swimming. The other is Jane. She used to go shopping, but now she likes collecting stamps better. She thinks collecting stamps is great fun.

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求按照題目結(jié)合表格完成這篇作文，我們要用簡(jiǎn)單準(zhǔn)確的句子把表格中的內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出來。寫作中要注意運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)與一般過去時(shí)這兩種時(shí)態(tài)。來描述每個(gè)人過去和現(xiàn)在的愛好，以及喜愛的原因。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知主語是第三人稱與第三人稱。并注意一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)的動(dòng)詞的三單形式。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)明、扼要地闡明了表格中列舉的三個(gè)人過去和現(xiàn)在的業(yè)余愛好。并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。其中使用的句式和短語都很準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng)，.如: I think running can build me up，keep my lungs and heart healthy. But now his hobby is to swim. She thinks collecting stamps is great fun.學(xué)習(xí)中再注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。