Question

【題目】寫作
學校的英語報就"爭做校園環(huán)保小衛(wèi)士"話題征文，請你投稿。
談談生活中你的具體做法、環(huán)境保護的重大意義以及你的環(huán)保倡議。
要求：1詞數80--100詞；
2短文中不得提及真實的人名和校名等信息；
3開頭和結尾已給出, 不計入總詞數。
提示詞語： collect bottles turn off duty make a real difference
Good environment is important foreveryone.

Answer 1

【答案】例文：
Good environment is important for everyone. To help with it, I pick up the litter when I see it on the floor. Besides, I always collect bottles and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.
As students, I think it's our duty to protect the environment of our school. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And it's also a good idea to take part in recycling programs.
I hope everyone will care about the environment. I believe we can make our school more and more beautiful.
【解析】作文要圍繞要點展開寫作：具體做法，感受，建議。要符合題目要求，觀點正確，要點齊全。句式多樣，詞匯豐富。語言準確，語意連貫，表達清楚，具有邏輯性.注意提示語collect bottles turn off duty make a real difference的運用。注意作文的升華，提出環(huán)保的意義。
寫作亮點：Tohelp with it, I pick up the litter when I see it on the floor. Besides,I alwayscollect bottles and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave theclassroom.1.具體做法最好寫上三點，三點之間要有過渡。過渡不要頻繁使用 first，second，third。這篇文章處理的很好，tohelp with it, Besides, and。2. 注意從句的運用，比如時間狀語從句，定語從句等。